Can a Special Coupon Boost Sales at My Upcoming Events?

[whiteyteresa]

I am having a few uncoming events and I want to draw more people in and sales.

Please look over the two attachments and let me know what you think

Does it sound okay?
Do you understand it?
Do you think they will understand it?

Please HELP

If changes are needed, could you change the stuff in red and then repost. This way I can keep everything straight - yea right

Thank You all

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[DebbieSAChef]

Great idea but....I think it's a great idea!! I am going to use this too, but with these changes:

Instead of telling them that she will get $5 in free products, maybe you can put down what Sharon's goal is like this (if she has a wishlist, you can do this with no problem):
Sharon's goal is to get $600 in sales to receive $115 in FREE products, 2 half price items and a 25% discount. Please help her reach her goal. Whenever you place an order for $25 - $49 you will recieve 10% off your purchase.
If you place an order of $50 or more you will get 10% off plus free shipping!

Then it is easier to send a note to each guest (along with their receipt) stating what the host earned after her show was closed and hopefully get some bookings!

Debbie

 

[urbnk8]

IPlease HELP

If changes are needed, could you change the stuff in red and then repost. This way I can keep everything straight - yea right

Thank You all

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Sounds pretty good! I just made a few little changes...take out the and (or plus), the extra s in uses. Not to be nitpicky, I'm just a little obsessive about grammar!!

View attachment Coupon Revised 10% off.doc

 

[urbnk8]

I think it's a great idea!! I am going to use this too, but with these changes:

Instead of telling them that she will get $5 in free products, maybe you can put down what Sharon's goal is like this (if she has a wishlist, you can do this with no problem):
Sharon's goal is to get $600 in sales to receive $115 in FREE products, 2 half price items and a 25% discount. Please help her reach her goal. Whenever you place an order for $25 - $49 you will recieve 10% off your purchase.
If you place an order of $50 or more you will get 10% off plus free shipping!

Then it is easier to send a note to each guest (along with their receipt) stating what the host earned after her show was closed and hopefully get some bookings!

Debbie

These are great ideas too!

 

[whiteyteresa]

I am so sorry - I left something out

The show has already closed - I am about to deliever the products to the host

I am trying to increase my sales this month - I will be putting these sales under some other host. Sharon had a great show so this will just add to it to this month sales for the sell a thon

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[whiteyteresa]

Sounds pretty good! I just made a few little changes...take out the and (or plus), the extra s in uses. Not to be nitpicky, I'm just a little obsessive about grammar!!

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Thank you for being 'nitpicky'

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[urbnk8]

Thank you for being 'nitpicky'

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Anytime!!