Is Expanding Fundraisers to Salons and Offices a Good Idea?

[sodapple09]

I want to expand my fundraiser and go into salons and different offices around where I live, I want to call first and I would like your opinion to see if it sounds good or maybe tweak it a bit to make it sound better. So here it goes:

Hi, my name is Karina and I'm a pampered chef consultant, I was wondering if you would like to participate on our Help to whip fundraiser to help the ACS

Depending on what they say, then I’ll continue pretty much I was thinking on saying something like, can I come over and explain it to you, if they say yes then I’ll go. If they want me to explain by phone then I’ll do so too, first with booking a show, then catalog, or even buying the pink products to help. Kind of pamper a business but I’ll just bring something over if they order or do something.
How does it sound? I’ll love your input, thanks =-D

 

[BlessedWifeMommy]

I want to expand my fundraiser and go into salons and different offices around where I live, I want to call first and I would like your opinion to see if it sounds good or maybe tweak it a bit to make it sound better. So here it goes:

Hi, my name is Karina and I'm a pampered chef consultant, I was wondering if you would like to participate on our Help to whip fundraiser to help the ACS

Depending on what they say, then I’ll continue pretty much I was thinking on saying something like, can I come over and explain it to you, if they say yes then I’ll go. If they want me to explain by phone then I’ll do so too, first with booking a show, then catalog, or even buying the pink products to help. Kind of pamper a business but I’ll just bring something over if they order or do something.
How does it sound? I’ll love your input, thanks =-D

Hi, my name is Karina with The Pampered Chef. We have a great fundraiser currently that raises money for Breast Cancer Awareness. Would you and your salon be interested in participating?

 

[sodapple09]

thank you!that sounds good, i'm going to start calling people =-)

 

[pampered1224]

Great idea Karina - keep us posted and much luck!

 

[Wildfire]

Hi Karina,I think your idea to expand your fundraiser to salons and offices is a great one! It's always good to reach out to different communities and businesses to spread awareness and support a good cause like the ACS.As for your approach, I think it's a good idea to call first and ask if they would be interested in participating in your Help to Whip fundraiser. If they say yes, then you can offer to come over and explain the details in person or by phone, depending on their preference. You can also mention the different ways they can support, whether it's through booking a show, ordering from the catalog, or purchasing the pink products.Overall, your approach sounds good and it's always a good idea to be flexible and accommodate the needs of the businesses you are reaching out to. Best of luck with your fundraiser and let me know if you need any further assistance or ideas!Best,