How Do I Write an Effective Thank You Letter to Past Hosts?

[wadesgirl]

I'm at a loss for words... apparently for the first time! I'm sending out a thank you letter to all my hosts for the year. I want to thank them for helping me out in my business, encouraging them to check out the catalog on my website, offering 10% discount through end of January along with free kitchen shows. Does anyone have one already that they would like to share?

 

[wadesgirl]

Here is what I have come up with so far but cannot figure out where to go with it nowearI want to thank you for having a show with me this year and making my business so successful! Without hosts like you, I truly would have no business in the kitchen. I celebrated two years with The Pampered Chef® at the beginning of November and could have never survived in this business without all my fabulous hosts!

 

[wadesgirl]

Okay, I think I got it now, must have been major writer's block last night. What do you think? Does it look alright?DearI want to thank you for having a show with me in the past year and making my business so successful! Without hosts like you, I truly would have no business in the kitchen. I celebrated two years with The Pampered Chef® at the beginning of November and could have never survived in this business without all my fabulous hosts!As one of my past hosts, I’m offering an extra 10% off any order placed with me before December 31, 2008. This is on top of your 10% Past Host Discount, what a great time to do a little shopping for yourself or those on your holiday lists.Plus, if you book a show with me and hold it before the end of January 2009, I will do a free kitchen show for you. That means I send out the invites and pick up the ingredients for the recipe you chose. I have a bunch of wonderful recipes that I’m offering right now including Chocolate Peanut Butter Cup Torte, Deluxe Mini Cheeseburgers and 30 Minute Chicken. Call me to book your show today, my schedule is filling up!Some of the other great benefits The Pampered Chef® has to offer are bridal showers, wedding registries, fundraisers and business opportunities. I also offer a referral bonus, 10% off your order for referring someone who books a show and $25 product credit for referring someone who starts their own business.I am looking forward to see what the new year brings and wanted to wish you and your family Happy Holidays!Your Consultant,