jennyl
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Hi, everyone,
I had a friend set up her Pampered Chef registry online. She's also registered at a couple other places. She does like the idea of guests being able to order right at the shower (save on shipping compared to ordering online, gift wrapping, and the gifts can go directly to the host)
As we were chatting about wording that on the invites, her shower organizer already sent the invites out!
They mentioned she's registered with TPC and the other places, but nothing about the option to order at the shower. She asked if I can send a follow up postcard and we can also post a note in the Facebook "save the date" event that was created.
So - I'm here for help with the wording (posted this on CS too). Would you mention anything about how by ordering at the shower they'll save on shipping/wrapping etc? I'd normally leave that out, but since we're competing with other registries I thought about including it.
Comments or suggestions on what I wrote below?
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A special wedding deserves a special shower! If you choose to shower (bride and groom) with gifts from The Pampered Chef, you will have the opportunity to select those gifts right at the shower (and you can shop for yourself too if you choose)! No need to shop ahead or gift wrap! We'll present (bride) with gift envelopes to open at the shower, showing what you chose for her, and gifts will ship right to their house. You can preview their registery at (website/their name). If you are unable to attend or would like to pre-order, you can contact our consultant, Jenny, directly at (contact info).
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(The "gift envelopes" I'll put together - people choose a gift from the display board I'll create and have a postcard to put in an envelope with the gift and their name). At the shower itself I can explain their purchases also help give the bride more host rewards, etc. Thanks in advance!
I had a friend set up her Pampered Chef registry online. She's also registered at a couple other places. She does like the idea of guests being able to order right at the shower (save on shipping compared to ordering online, gift wrapping, and the gifts can go directly to the host)
As we were chatting about wording that on the invites, her shower organizer already sent the invites out!
They mentioned she's registered with TPC and the other places, but nothing about the option to order at the shower. She asked if I can send a follow up postcard and we can also post a note in the Facebook "save the date" event that was created.
So - I'm here for help with the wording (posted this on CS too). Would you mention anything about how by ordering at the shower they'll save on shipping/wrapping etc? I'd normally leave that out, but since we're competing with other registries I thought about including it.
Comments or suggestions on what I wrote below?
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A special wedding deserves a special shower! If you choose to shower (bride and groom) with gifts from The Pampered Chef, you will have the opportunity to select those gifts right at the shower (and you can shop for yourself too if you choose)! No need to shop ahead or gift wrap! We'll present (bride) with gift envelopes to open at the shower, showing what you chose for her, and gifts will ship right to their house. You can preview their registery at (website/their name). If you are unable to attend or would like to pre-order, you can contact our consultant, Jenny, directly at (contact info).
~~~~~~~~~
(The "gift envelopes" I'll put together - people choose a gift from the display board I'll create and have a postcard to put in an envelope with the gift and their name). At the shower itself I can explain their purchases also help give the bride more host rewards, etc. Thanks in advance!